<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二零二六年三月下社課</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">要求：用去聲韻二十一個作五言絕句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刊頭題字 ：謝宗山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">收集簡評 ：梁正森</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇編輯 ：趙以順</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【周國慶】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">AI作詩</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">科技屢翻新，鈔公文思惰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">拿來署己名，卻道非人過。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春風途上</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳葉密梳長，櫓邊風曳破。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">樗樗擬圣姿，鳥語爭相和。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">智 能</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">前文抄可鈔，或曰和猶禍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">得意縱容時，終將被勘破。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春 聲</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">泥途車馬喧，死水因塵涴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幾只鳥棲枝，來將春啄破。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春 雨</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忽而風逐塵，淅瀝穿林過。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">獨向雨中行，癡癡人一個。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春 花</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">婀娜曳夭姿，庶幾思倚臥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">佳期常寂寥，徒有芳名播。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春 水</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閑絳弄曲溪，鶯語遙相和。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卻似楚歌吟，魚兒哀九些。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">簡評：春花多爛漫，春水揚綠波。春雨滋萬物，春聲落花歌。周兄一如既往，嫉惡如仇。文鈔公臉厚心黑，奈何。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">【謝 勇】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丙午新正</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">謀粱久役形，忙碌難閑坐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">戴月復(fù)披星，歲時駒隙過。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丙午正月晦日</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奔波圖飽溫，安得閑中坐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曉立侍爐煙，期囊添幾個。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">簡評：民生大如天，草民安得閑。奔波已半世，何好枕流眠。勇鍋之詩，一味牽掛底層，笑中有淚，歌哭民生，贊 ！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【劉先倫】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丙午共青湖畔賞春</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新柳呼春坐，流鶯相應(yīng)和。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可憐花亂飛，意欲粘哪個。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">野徑尤可坐，賞花不覺餓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何來一陣風，卻把春彈破。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">流年難看破，故在花間坐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">惠風亂衣襟，欲把自在播？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黃蜂呷甜糯，粉蝶咂香唾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鋸齒噬芳心，憐花有幾個？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳絲皴水破，曉鶯枝上和。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲岸野芳香，慵懶花間臥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">六</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今春看又過，水里白云臥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">誰解故人心，亂紅深處坐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">流鶯說我惰，實乃是看破。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春景美一時，韶光自帶銼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">簡評：共青湖畔問流鶯，春日遲遲春水生。紫萬紅千花下坐，黃蜂粉蝶總關(guān)情。羨慕騷人，尋春覓句，處處有詩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【趙學(xué)鵬】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">過婁山關(guān)</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">故道驅(qū)車過，有碑雄道左。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">原知血色殷，不是春光涴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">排軍古驛</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一線貫川黔，沉沉經(jīng)古播。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">塘房虛掩門，留待春巡邏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">塘房：位于川黔古道排軍村，為舊時傳遞、收發(fā)公文的驛站。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">排軍菜花節(jié)見聞</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">攜風同入座，與鳥兩相和。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">阿妹在花田，春光中直播。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">太白鎮(zhèn)懷李白</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花間誰置壺，歲歲盛香糯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">對月已成仨，不曾聞謦唾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">獅溪逢菜花節(jié)有感兩會會員提議給農(nóng)民增加養(yǎng)老金</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">車行料峭風，春路起顛簸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃投李報難，昔時多歲課。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">過東溪</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嶺下一溪寒，難將青界破。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春光滿世間，還待明兒個。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">重慶參加周平峰師弟拜師宴</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幸得立門墻，未分賓主坐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">席間誰唱先，黃鸝枝頭賀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">渝北云龜山訪酒</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">載得一壇歸，來將春負馱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">更憐山里人，春釀歲前作。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">簡評：載酒尋詩詩興多，江湖處處有傳說。興亡成敗苦黎黔，誰為蒼生鼓嚨呼。蛙哥載酒尋詩，一路行吟，有反思，有展望，有關(guān)注，更有深情。羨慕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【牟明英】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">湖畔行</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新燕柳中翩，音清相與和。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橋頭逢故人，同語桃花破。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">見彩虹</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨霽鳥高飛，天橋云上臥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">縱然轉(zhuǎn)瞬消，一望千愁破。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">合唱團學(xué)歌</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白首又如何，重修聲樂課。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閑來勤練功，南郭今無惰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">簡評：春風花鳥惰，物我隨坐臥。忘形到爾汝，老來有喜樂。白首何妨詩與樂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【唐嘉誠】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">感因近事</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">又道一天過，遑言坐與臥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">憂心千萬萬，傾吐向誰個？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不立亦不破，堪言受折磨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悔之猶不及，更與哪人和。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">簡評：青春易逝，白首同期。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">似有佳人，琴瑟鼓之。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【文受剛】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">遐想生活點滴</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昔日皆因惰，機緣輕易破。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如今悔也遲，牢記當初錯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">因緣能幾個，轉(zhuǎn)瞬云煙過。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">若不及時抓，終身成大錯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清閑沙發(fā)坐，疲憊寬床臥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">茶飯日三餐，老來成吃貨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兩口舒心過，居然生懶惰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">洗衣拖地板，上演雙推磨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">日子清閑過，心中需掌舵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">他人欲借錢，慎勿輕承諾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">簡評：耋耄老詩翁，筆底意蔥蘢。尋常過日子，咳唾珠玉生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【祝西峰】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">聽畫眉</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春山數(shù)鳥啼，總是聲相和。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">愛聽畫眉歌，知音能幾個。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">種包谷</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春種在山前，停鋤田坎坐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">東風帶落花，從我身邊過。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">簡評：老學(xué)田舍翁，詩興綠野中。園田慕五柳，東籬臥花叢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【廖德勛】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">汪老師退休</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">榮休頗羨君，訪水訪山可。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">案牘不勞形，詩文當更夥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">感 時</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時艱人重荷，形役真如鎖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天地大熔爐，難逃千萬我。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">行路難</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">志氣安能墮，一任顛與簸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奈何山道盤，不右即歸左。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">簡評：慕他忘形役，嘆我行路難。長風思破浪，滄海會揚帆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【汪守先】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">亭 下</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春中步曉晴，亭下成詩課。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">隨口漫吟風，山花時入座。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">齋 室</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山林供勝賞，齋室作高臥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">淺酌小詩成，閑看斜日墮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">簡評：從今遠案牘，潛心研詩課。汗漫游滄海，釣鰲逍遙過。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">【牟明鵬】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春日閑言</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時序近清明，晴溪風柳臥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">絲垂綠岸波，更喜魚兒惰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林下尋山貨，歸家隨料佐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何需胖大廚，口亦生津唾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">簡評：春水弄春波，春風醒春柳。清明思歸客，陌上尋春酒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【趙以順】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">賀汪老師丙午榮退</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">樊籠今已破，鷗鷺競相賀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萬事自由心，春江波上臥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">踏 春</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春暖裁新詩，鶯兒相與和。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山中閑散人，獨愛花田坐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">簡評：慕他得自在，慕君有余閑。裁詩剪云錦，裝點成花箋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【梁正森】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">無 題</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春光誰撞破，春色攬人坐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春風亂入懷，使我春情惰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">催 詩</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">催詩亦苦差，擂鼓疑做作。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作詩似布陣，圣賢排隊坐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">簡評：拙作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p>
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